Fridays are the best!
As a kid in my opinion
Friday always leads me
To smile like this minion.
Why do I love Fridays?
Well here's a reason why
Fridays sometimes tend to say
To all those hard work bye, bye.
To all those people who think
Fridays are the worst
Maybe you should think about Monday
And think about all that hard work?
By - Leilani
Talofa Leilani. Given our very brief introduction to rhyming and rhythm in poetry I think you have made a great start! I am looking forward to seeing further poetry from you. Especially how you will write poems about your home and school experiences.
ReplyDeleteKia orana Leilani Irene here, Love the poem cause its true Friday is the best day cause its the last day of the week. The poem rhymes, keep up the good work.
ReplyDeleteMalo e lelei Leilani,I really like how you write you're poem and how it rhythms , maybe you could write another poem about the worst day of the week and I wish to read more poems from you.Keep up the good work and well done!!!!!
ReplyDeleteHello Leilani, I really love how you write your poem about Friday, and I also love Friday, it is the best day of my school life, no more hard work, I love it rhythms, you can write another poem, about your worst day ever, but you don't need too.
ReplyDeleteKeep up the good work and good job (: